Friday, November 30, 2012


Jordan Jensen

Mr. John Hardison

American Literature (Honors)

16 November 2012
Is it really a question of prohibition or self choice?
Ones have raised their hands voluntarily to protest or to praise what they have built just from their dreams. If their morals could withstand the trials faced by all through war, a depression, and self-mutilation due to the mere feel of losing prosperity, then why must those who they held close as their own try them once more? Prohibition is degrading the economy by starving the pockets of the people and making them loses their sense of being. They as well felt the lack of the spirits and the freedom that the people pleaded for. Other great men have spoken on the same behalf of this belief that prohibition is un-American. As a man by the name Thomas Paine once said, "He that stands now, deserves the love and the thanks of men and women... yet we have this consolation with us, that the harder the conflict, the more glorious the triumph." (Paine 160) As well as a man named Benjamin franklin once said, “Beer is proof that god loves us and wants us to be happy.” How great those spoken words were we must show thanks along with honoring the will of people such as those two by following in the steps they rightly took for us. For they opened the life we have now as we know it.

 Do we not wish for our own will to triumph as well? This right to hold our self-accountable and have that drink is like our voice and we need to cherish it as so. The second it is silenced we are lost to everyone because time displaces all memories, but only a legacy can stand among the news of that day and show the truth felt in some men’s hearts. Please go to the unknowing and tell your story now, not the things of the day but our reasoning for what we keep holding to. Then stand here and tell me that we all have the right to our own choice and the prohibition shouldn’t be just an able bodied man’s choice.

 Is it not our own individual rights that give us the chance to bring up our voice and to show the one true strength that in a good fight could not ever be choked out? The establishment of America and its way consist of finding what we cherish and creating the path to obtaining that dream. For if you place the cup in the hand of the thirsty will he not drink, also if you place a cup in the hand of the satisfied man will he not refuse. As Americans we are the voice of our own reason the one that should decide whether we are allowed as long as we are at the control of our own body with an acceptably sound mind. Let me just ask you this, would you allow a master piece to be ripped apart or a child unprotected or a danger unchecked? Then why would we leave our selves vulnerable to an internal attack? The strong are the ones who reach down and pick up the lowly. Let me hear it now are we all here strong or are we going to hide on the crutch of another man’s possible wavering wills! “I have no fear… For our motives are presently misunderstood.” (King jr. 180) Rights are given to the takes so i ask you now to take for yourself.
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